You may be familiar with my series of beau présents recently written as tributes to my favorite poets that I have been posting on this blog lately. Well, the poem I am posting today is not part of that series; it is definitely not a beau présent, anf not actually in any specific poetry form per se (though it was certainly written in a style meant to emulate the poet I was attempting to honor: E. E. Cummings). The following poem was written over 20 years ago when Peter Mancevice, the publisher of a local poetry journal called Sahara, approached poets in the Worcester, MA area (including myself), asking them to write and submit poems about their favourite poets and the reasons why they liked them for a planned special issue. Apparently there wasn’t a sufficient amount of submissions, and this special edition of the journal never came to fruition. However, Peter did graciously end up publishing my response to his request in their Spring/Summer 2001 issue. I must note that my poem was first written with very unusual spacing and line breaks in an attempt to imitate Cummings, but unfortunately I found WordPress is unable to preserve the original typography, thus the version you will be reading here has more conventional spacing and lines. Also the first and last lines intentionally reference two of my favorite Cummings’ poems : i like my body when its with your body and somewhere i have never travelled, gladly beyond.
Here is my poem (I hope you will enjoy it):
A great poem, Paul! I think you captured the form and feel of Cumming’s work beautifully in this ode. Quirky and unexpected with just a hint of whimsy and wit. Well written!
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Thank you do much, Brad! Your kind comments mean a lot to me.😊
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Delightful poem, Paul. I think you captured the intent of Cumming’s work superbly.
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Thank you so much, Eugenia! I really appreciate your kind feedback!😊
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You’re welcome, Paul. 😃
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I find your tribute poem very interesting. Well done!
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate that.😊
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Delightful, Paul. Really captures the style and spirit of e.e. (one of my favorite poets, as well).
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Thank you so much, Mitch! I really appreciate that.😊
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Reblogged this on Mitch Teemley and commented:
My Featured Blogger this week is Paul Szlosek of Paul’s Poetry Playground. Paul is a first-order poetry aficionado (he even looks like a poet). A past recipient of the Jacob Knight Award for Poetry, his work has appeared in numerous publications. He’s also studies, teaches and quotes other poets, and invents new poetic forms.
This tribute to e. e. cummings (one of my favorite poets, as well) is absolutely spot-on and delightful!
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Wow! Thank you so much, Mitch! I really appreciate the reblog and your incredibly kind words.😀😀😀
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I loved this piece. I would love to read it in its original format.
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Thank you so much, Joseph! That is so kind of you. I wish I was able to figure out how I could preserve the original spacing of the poem on WordPress, but each time I tried, It would not work…
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Yeah the WP editor is spatially persnickety.
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Very cool. It has a high degree of musicality to it. Fun to read aloud. Makes me wanna go re-visit
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Thank you so much, Vernon! Hearing that means a lot to me…😊
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I like this very much! “Delightful” is just the right word to describe your tribute to e.e. cummings.
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Thank you, Liz! That is so kind of you to say…I am so happy you liked my poem!😀
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You’re welcome, Paul! 🙂
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Love it, Paul!
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Thank you so much, Bette! 😊
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A fine tribute to E.E. Cummings’ work with words …
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Thank you so much, Carolyn! I really appreciate that…😊
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You’re most welcome, Paul!
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