In today’s post, I’d like to share with you a poem that I wrote which originally appeared in the premiere issue of the Concrete Wolf journal of poetry close to twenty-one years ago. I sincerely hope you enjoy it…
People-Watching at the No-Name Diner
While digesting two cheeseburgers and a side order of fries, you begin to speculate on the circumstances of strangers, assigning stories to the unfamiliar faces. The scraggly fellow with a pen becomes a millionaire poet incognito, transforming the lunch habits of the working poor into the ultimate metaphor for the nature of existence. And the throng of giggling adolescents at the table to the left are plotting the overthrow of the Archdiocese, starting with Saint Ignatius’ School for Wayward Girls. But soon, you find your attention shifting, dwelling upon the two figures furthest from you:
A stick-thin girl, midway through her teens, and a bearded man, at least a generation removed. They could be father and daughter, or illegal lovers, wedged into one side of their corner booth like paupers in Potter’s Field. They sit graveyard still, motionless as upright corpses, neither daring to disturb the ghosts laid buried in their silence.
Something is strangely amiss, someone should be there, her presence or the lack of it, a gaping hole in this tableau. Although you hear no sobs, see no tears, you can sense their mourning, their grief, thick and black as smoke wafting up from the grease-splattered grill. And you must look away out of respect for those who might be dead and those who simply wish to be.
—Paul Szlosek (originally published in Concrete Wolf)
Paul Szlosek was born in Southbridge, Massachusetts, but currently resides in the nearby metropolis of Worcester. He was co-founder and host of the long-running Poet’s Parlor poetry reading in Southbridge and Sturbridge, as well as a past recipient of the Jacob Knight Award for Poetry. His poems have appeared in various local publications including the Worcester Review, Worcester Magazine, Sahara, Concrete Wolf, and Diner. He’s probably best known in the Worcester poetry community for his fanatical obsession with obscure poetry forms, and has invented his own including the ziggurat, the streetbeatina, and (most recently) the hodgenelle.
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15 thoughts on “People-Watching at the No-Name Diner”
A great poem Paul. It is so interesting to be in a crowd or group and observe the people around you. Assumption fly through the mind as you muse over each one. Well done.
Excellent poem! I was very moved by it.
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Poetic excellence, Paul! Loved this moment you shared.
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Thank you so much, Brad! As always, you are very kind.
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Oh, my! This is a stunning piece! Bravo!
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Thank you so much, Eugi! Your feedback means a lot to me…
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WONDERFUL WONDERMENT!
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Thank you, Jonathan!
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UR welcome!
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A great poem Paul. It is so interesting to be in a crowd or group and observe the people around you. Assumption fly through the mind as you muse over each one. Well done.
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Thank you so very much! I know for myself people-watching is a fascinating experience…
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You are welcome! I love doing that myself.
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Love it.
Just love it.
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Hi John, Thank you so very much1 i am so pleased that you like my poem.
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Really touched me 😊 thank you for sharing!
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You are very welcome, Rini! Thank you so much for reading my poem. I’m so pleased you like it!
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