A little more than a year ago, I published a post on the Streetbeatina, a poetry form I originally created to celebrate the fifth anniversary of the Street Beat, an amazing open poetry reading series that was ran and hosted by Anne Marie Lucci, a talented local poet, in my hometown of Worcester, Massachusetts for many years. At the time, since three of my streetbeatinas, along with a short history and explanation of the form, was just published in a prestigious online literary journal called Radius: Poetry From the Center to the Edge, I decided it probably wasn’t proper etiquette to republish those 3 poems or go into much details on how to write the form on this blog and instead just posted a link to the original publication on radiuslit.org. However I feel enough time has now passed to revisit the Streetbeatina and give instructions on how to write one using those 3 original poems as examples:
The streetbeatina is an eight line poem with each line consisting of eight syllables. What makes this form both a challenge to write and uniquely different from other forms is that the first syllable of the first line is repeated as the second syllable in the second line, the third syllable of the third line and so on, the repetition of the sound of the syllable at precise intervals providing the poem with a natural beat and musicality. Although it is completely optional, the poet can emphasize the repeated syllable by either printing it in italics, bold, or a different color.
Three Streetbeatinas by Paul Szlosek *
Travel Advisory
Go unprepared into the world.
Forgo certainty. Pretend to
be cargo bound for distant ports
(perhaps the Gobi Desert? Mars?)
Travel by pogo stick or dreams,
a blank map: your logo. Treat the
unknown as your amigo. Or
ignore this advice, but go. Go!
A Message to a Married Middle-Aged Man
in Middle-Management in Mid-Life Crisis With Artistic Ambitions
So few chances to start over,
go solo, cover past mistakes
with gesso, paint a new version
of your life (sophisticated,
worldly, yet also real) like a
truly virtuoso artist
living in a loft in Soho.
to replace one that’s just so-so.
Ghost Story
Local legends say if you go
solo into the deep dark woods
when the lotus blossom first blooms,
and the moon’s low in the night sky,
the girl in yellow will appear,
her lips mouthing “Hello, my love”
while lunar light spills like lotion
on skin translucent as jello.
*(Originally published by Radius: Poetry From the Center to the Edge )
Looks like fun! I might, try this.😊
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Thank you, Jen! That would be wonderful!😁
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We’ll see Paul. But I copied your example just in case. 😊 I think I understand the format. Very lyrical.
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This looks like a fun and challenging form. I look forward to giving it a try and covering it in my weekly series on poetry forms, with appropriate credit of course.
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Thank you so much, Brad! If you do try one, I would love to see it!😊
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I will make sure you see it. May I have your permission to use some of yours in my weekly series of posts on poetry forms?
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Yes, definitely, Brad! I would be very honored if you did…😀
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I love learning new poetry forms, so thank you for posting this! You’ve written some great examples, especially that last one!
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You are very welcome! I am so pleased you like the form and my poems.
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What fun! I particularly like the second one.
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Thank you so much, Liz!😀
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You’re welcome, Paul!
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I remember this and thanks for bringing it back! I’ll have to try it.
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Thank you so much, Eugenia!☺
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Reblogged this on Eugi's Causerie I and commented:
Sharing poetry form Streetbeatina by Paul’s Poetry Playground –
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I really like this poetry form! It’s so cool!
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Thank you so much, Eugenia! I am so pleased you like the form!😊
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I love how these go by the syllables progressing forward in each line. My favorite is Ghost Story 🙂
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Thank you so much!😊
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Paul, here is my attempt at your beautiful and innovative form. I promised to share it with you when I had completed it. You will see your form covered in my weekly series “Whittled Words” in the very near future. Thank you for allowing me to share this with my readers!
SEASIDE LOVE
See what light doth hold in embrace
As sea flashes back a twinkling
Night in Seattle remembered
Where our love celestial sparkling
Heart leaps lunacy with such ease
Woven strong is the seamstress thread
Desires blow within sea breeze
And hope makes real the fantasy
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Wow! Fantastic job on your streebeatina, Brad! Thank you so much for letting me see it, you really mastered the form. 😀
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Thanks, Paul! My series will cover the form on July 24th.
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Thanks, Brad! I am eagerly looking forward to it.☺
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Thank you so much for the link, Eugenia!
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